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Click play and read slowly to the music for full effect






Can you make it?
can you stay?
can you pull through another day?

Because I won't let you leave
you can't give up on me
I refuse to let you go
you are precious to me
more than you know

I will walk you through
I will be there
me and you

I will take on your demons
I will slaughter them all for you
so you don't have to

Just stay
don't let your kind heart fade
don't let your mind break

Damn it!
if I could I'd take it all away

But I can only stand at your side
if you are willing to trust me
in me you can confide

Anything
just say the word
I will surely not wait a second to act
a nod and it will be done - SNAP

So please hold on
don't let go of your life
both of my hands I willingly give
to make your burdens light

I will fight to hold together your shattered soul
just don't give up on me

Stay with me!

Hold on!
These are just a few words written to inspire, strengthen and encourage. 

Written to:

Ninja Tracks - Shattered Soul

 
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Fameisdead Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I really like this Hug your poems are very beautiful :3
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Deadfish-SilentArmy Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww thankyou, and thankyou for the watch. :hug:
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Fameisdead Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:3 your welcome ^^
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fleur-de-Lis4444 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
i really like it.. thank you ^^
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Deadfish-SilentArmy Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank YOU!
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fleur-de-Lis4444 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
:D
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Silidons00 Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I always listen to epic music when I read. You've chosen a perfect song for a beautiful poem.
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Deadfish-SilentArmy Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, that song is one of my favourites at the moment, and it was lovely to write to.
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LMW-Creations Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
What a lovely poem... Beautiful. :)
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Deadfish-SilentArmy Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, oh and thankyou for the membership request too.
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
A very positive message. I like it :)
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Deadfish-SilentArmy Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, it was about time I thought that  I rallied my positive side.
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
You're welcome. And yeah, it's good to change sometimes.
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Deadfish-SilentArmy Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, we all need a change sometimes, and thankyou for the kind favourite.
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
You're welcome.
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AnnaBellLee17 Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Student Writer
this is very emotional...... wow...
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Deadfish-SilentArmy Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thankyou...
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AnnaBellLee17 Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Student Writer
you're welcome.
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Zinke300 Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Student Writer
This is very encouraging, and very nice. Well done :)
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Deadfish-SilentArmy Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks, I am pleased you think so.
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Zinke300 Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Student Writer
:)
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fleur-de-Lis4444 Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Its good to have someone when you break..someone who holds you and be there for you..i like your poetry..thank you for these words 
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Deadfish-SilentArmy Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You are more than welcome, they were inspired by a friend who would say the same to me. I am pleased that they are an encouragement to you also.
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fleur-de-Lis4444 Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
:)
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